You can write very well! Writing could be in your future if it already isn't. Good memory! You're right we remember moments specifically with great clarity when from a traumatic situation.
It's your story, write it as you want. There's always more people on here to tell you what's wrong and how to change it than getting a "good job"!
Why Miss DAISY I do declare. Good points. Probably shouldn't have read it as a tract.
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